I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello welcome back to my blog today I am going to show you my slide about Cheetahs so I made facts and pictures about it and it is really cool so here is the slide.
Kia ora Ethan, Wow, this is amazing you know so many facts about Cheetahs, and I think you taught a lot of people more about them. Maybe next time you can make it look a bit more prettier but that's ok because you still had a lot of facts. Blog you later
Ciao Ethan, i like this i learn lots about cheethas are a very cool animal how did you get all this information about cheethas but is the cheethas the fast animal in the world like for real is it well i had to go bye.
Kia Ora Ethan H, Shyla here. I really like this slide about cheetahs, and have learned more about them. I never knew how fast they could run! Maybe next time, you could put just a tiny bit more information, but other than that this was pretty perfect!
Kia Ora Ethan H, its Stephanie here, I am really thrilled when I read the facts, I really like the information alot, I don't really have a question because it is better enough for more improvement, I really like the height facts because not much people can explain it like this, But anyways Bye!
Kia, ora Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I love your facts about cheetahs Maybe next time you could add how old they are? and are they called cubs? I enjoyed your work! from- Milla
hey Ethan H it Acasia here its so funny because i did the same animal al you because i love cheetahs too. I liked the way how you done some really cool photos on each slide. You knocked my socks off when i saw how much writing you did on all of the slides good job.
Hi Ethan its Chrysler MacDonald well you know me don't you have you been doing lately I like how you put a lot of info about cheeters maybe you can 66-94 cms long would you like to be a cheeter yourself.
Hello Ethan that is a lot of cool information about cheetahs and I made a slide for rhinos with facts so if you want to look at it. is your favorite animal a cheetah.
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hi ethan its me kian i like your post about cheetahs maybe next time you could explain what those big words mean but it was pretty cool
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ethan,
ReplyDeleteWow, this is amazing you know so many facts about Cheetahs, and I think you taught a lot of people more about them. Maybe next time you can make it look a bit more prettier but that's ok because you still had a lot of facts.
Blog you later
Ciao Ethan, i like this i learn lots about cheethas are a very cool animal how did you get all this information about cheethas but is the cheethas the fast animal in the world like for real is it well i had to go bye.
ReplyDeletehay ethan it is benaiah i love Cheetahs as will it is aowseem i will like if you had done more facts good bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ethan H, Shyla here.
ReplyDeleteI really like this slide about cheetahs, and have learned more about them. I never knew how fast they could run! Maybe next time, you could put just a tiny bit more information, but other than that this was pretty perfect!
kia Ora EthanH i really like your blog post because its about cheetahs and i think cheetahs are really cool and you added alot of information
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ethan H, its Stephanie here, I am really thrilled when I read the facts, I really like the information alot, I don't really have a question because it is better enough for more improvement, I really like the height facts because not much people can explain it like this, But anyways Bye!
ReplyDeletekia ora Ethan H it's Jonte here i love your cheetah slides and love how you put the words in to your own words
ReplyDeleteKia, ora Milla here from Gilberthorpe School.
ReplyDeleteI love your facts about cheetahs Maybe next time you could add how old they are? and are they called cubs? I enjoyed your work! from- Milla
hey Ethan H it Acasia here its so funny because i did the same animal al you because i love cheetahs too. I liked the way how you done some really cool photos on each slide. You knocked my socks off when i saw how much writing you did on all of the slides good job.
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan its Chrysler MacDonald well you know me don't you have you been doing lately I like how you put a lot of info about cheeters maybe you can 66-94 cms long would you like to be a cheeter yourself.
ReplyDeleteHey Ethan this is Angus and I like how you put facts about cheetahs. madye next time you should make it more colorful BLOG YOU LATTER!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHello Ethan that is a lot of cool information about cheetahs and I made a slide for rhinos with facts so if you want to look at it. is your favorite animal a cheetah.
ReplyDeleteKia ora kevin my favourite animal is a Tiger my second is a cheetah. but thanks for the comment.
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