I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
In Australia beach I hear sea gulls flying in the sky,flapping their wings.I feel” the sand and the sea and the waves. I taste ice cream on a hot day. I smell the salt water,ice cream. i see the water and the waves blasting in my face.
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Hey there, I’m Bryce from Hornby Primary School. I enjoyed`the part when you had fan at the Beach
ReplyDeleteHey there, I’m Bryce from Hornby Primary School. I enjoyed`the part when you had fan at the Beach
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