I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello welcome back to another blog post today i'm going to show you about Onomatopoeia I done ... CRACK! with like Crack lines coming out the Crack sigh so here it is-
Hi Ethan Jesse here I like your Onomatopoeia but maybe add more Onomatopoeia like boom, pow, pop and bang like that and maybe add more words. BLOG YOU LATER!!!
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Hi Ethan Jesse here I like your Onomatopoeia but maybe add more Onomatopoeia like boom, pow, pop and bang like that and maybe add more words. BLOG YOU LATER!!!
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