(my dog) please don’t eat too much otherwise you will go over weight, if you don’t eat too much I will get you a dog massage bed if that's a thing. The reason to not eat so much is so you can walk, otherwise you will be way too heavy. For example, go for a run around the yard and that should lose weight. I will help you do this. I will play fetch, throw one of your toys and I will chase you to lose weight. We will go for a swim and that should lose some weight. You can also drink a lot of water you can run for ages and you lose weight and stay hydrated at the same time. Ok this is the end of the letter so please lose weight from Ethan.
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Hi Ethan.
ReplyDeleteI like this post because it is really funny and it's cool that you put ways for Rocky to lose weight and telling him not to eat too much. You should split the writing into paragraphs next time.
Kia ora Kareem I love bulling my dog rocky and he is over weight and putting the writing into paragraphs is a great idea so thanks for the comment
DeleteHello Ethan, Nice blog post.
ReplyDeleteI really like the part when you said " We will go for swim " and the part where you said " And drink lots of water" Because you already have water in your system. Nextime you could try and do it as a animation. Was this in literacy? Bye
Kia ora Kirsty I like you comment yeah I love my dog and it is a good Idea to do a animation and yes I did do this in literacy
DeleteKia ora Ethan
ReplyDeleteThis is a good example of a persuasive letter. If I was given this letter I might be persuaded to lose weight and do these things, (Don't send it to me though). So is this based on facts? Do you actually have a dog called Rocky and is Rocky a little on the chunky side?
Kia ora Miss Waho thanks for the comment and yes I do have a dog called rocky and he is over weight but he is a good dog he just is over weight and I love as a dog because he is so loyal and he is a helthy dog.
DeleteHeya Ethan,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great persuasive letter to your dog. I like that you told Rocky not to eat too much food, Next time you could make sure that your punctuation is checked before you put it on your blog. But other than that great job!
Talofa Ethan H,Acasia here
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good piece of writing here and I really like your writing because you have put why he should not eat and so that makes your story for interesting. This is also really persuasive and if I was your dog and I could read on a computer and I saw this peaice of writing it would peswade me. Anyways good job!
Sorry I spelled some words wrong..
DeleteTalofa Ethan H, I like how you made your persuasive letter and it so many it made me dizzy to read it. I like your dog's name rocky. I like dog's too you know because you can play with them. Bye
ReplyDeletehi its ethan I what are u doing u have doing a alot of wrting have u put all of u fullsports maybe u shold look bye have a good day.
ReplyDeletehi ethan h
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan,
ReplyDeleteThis is a VERY persuasive letter! You gave Rocky a lot of great reasons to lose weight. I think you might need to read your letter out loud to your dog since he probably can't log on to read your blog!
Kia Ora Ethan H it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteThis letter made me laugh in some parts of it.
I like your dogs name Rockey.
Is he getting a little bit over wait?