08.03.17
The port hills fire
It was a enormous fire.There were two fires that joint together. It made an enormous fire. It was white and black smoke in the air the Farmers were shocked and confused because the flames were coming towards them.the fire went on burning for one week. Then the fire stopped and then the firefighters went home to have tea and then went to bed after that they were exhausted.
I like your fire story Ethan i like your fallstops,
ReplyDeleteKiaora I'm Aryan just checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteI like that you put some really good words in here.
Just remember full stops next time.
Anyways bye!
Hi this is Sonny here ,I like how you used your wow words.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Ethan H im Sita from Rimu Class you might of not seen me before. I really like your little story you have writtin you have a lot of good decribing words in it! I also really like how you added in how the two fires joint into one big one! The last thing that I really like about this story is that how you wrote about how the people that lived close to the Port Hills felt about the fire! One question, how did you feel about the fire were you confuesed, shocked, scared or any other feeling?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the AWESOME work!!!!
Bye
Hi Ethan, Tobey here.
ReplyDeleteI like how you research to get the full story and how you said what the farmers and the fire men were felling.
How did the fire stop?
Hi it's Nevaeh in Rimu
ReplyDeleteI like all the big words that you used in the story.
Next time you can put some photos on there.
fantastic anyway bye!
Kia ora Chloe here
ReplyDeleteI have really been blown away by this blog post.I also love how you have said a lot of descriptive words like exhausted.Maybe next time you could add more about how it started maybe you could do some research.Iv got a question.How did you know the firefighters went home and had tea.bye for now.
Hey Ethan it's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have you used interesting words like enormous, exhausted.
Next time put a picture too and put capital after full stop.
see you next time.
Hello Ethan Tyler here.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used exhausted.
Next time could you add a little bit more to it because that was really interesting.
Interesting piece of writing! I didn't know that the fire was two fires that joined together. I definitely think that the firefighters deserved a good rest after all their hard work. Do you know how the fire was stopped?
ReplyDeleteWow what great comments about your story. You should be proud of whay you learnt and wrote. You should read carefully all the comments and be proud of the sharing.
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