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Friday 24 August 2018

Rubbish

Hello welcome back to another blog post. Today I am going to show you my learning in writing and it is really important because it is rubbish. Rubbish is around mostly everywhere. It is at Schools, Houses and Streets. Rubbish is bad for sea animals because they can die. "But I am spoiling my writing so I should just show you my writing now. But before I go I think my next step in my writing is to Have more full stops that make sense. But anyway Here's my writing"-

 Rubbish

Rubbish is everywhere in the streets, Schools and parks and Rubbish is bad for the sea animals. They will choke on the plastic and there get really sick and die.

My opinion is that the rubbish is really bad for people to look at. It is in the dranes and stuff like that.

We need to fix the problem by getting a big dump truck and just cleaning the whole school and streets and it would be so nice because it will make our streets and school way nicer. This is a photo of rubbish-


Thanks for reading and looking at my writing I will see you later for another post.
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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 September 2018 at 10:37

    Kia ora my name is Shannon. i like the idea. but if all the rubbish was in one place it would be very bad for that one place.

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  2. Anonymous12 September 2018 at 10:12

    Hi ethan did you enjoy doing this work everybody needs to pick up rubbish and good job on this writing great i like how you do it great job.

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  3. Anonymous12 September 2018 at 10:14

    Kia ora Ethan, This is a very good post, it should get people thinking about rubbish they dropped. I like how much you wrote, they're a lot of great info about what rubbish can do. Maybe for parts of your writing you could add more punctuation, like on the last part in between writing and I. See you later!

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  4. Anonymous12 September 2018 at 10:22

    kia ora Ethan.
    Its Te mihaea herer
    i like how you put lots of writing on this blog post you have done this may have took you a long time and has well i could not even do this much of writing next time you could put more phtos on theis blog post
    well i have to go now bye.

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  5. Anonymous12 September 2018 at 10:22

    kia ora Ethan.
    Its Kaycee herer
    i like how much writing you have done it is amazing did you enjoy writing this may took a long time to do.
    next time you could but a other photos on this blog pist
    well i have to go now bye

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  6. Anonymous12 September 2018 at 10:26

    kia ora ethan.I like how you have done a lot of work on keeping the environment clean.I agree you should put more full stop commas and much more, but you have done good, see you later.

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  7. Anonymous12 September 2018 at 10:48


    kia ora Ethan.
    Its Cayleigh here
    i like how much writing you have done it is amazing did you enjoy writing this may took a long time to do.
    Next time you can put why you put this no your blog.

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  8. Anonymous12 September 2018 at 10:56

    hi am ethan I and it is so bad of seeing that rubashe and you are rite about the it everywirl it is so bad i know so it is grase and why does have to be so mech rubashe it is so bad Ethan goood job

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