The Forest Bunker

Hello everyone today, I am going to talk about my story about The Forest bunker it is a fictional story. It's about a boy that comes across a bunker hidden in the middle of the woods, I'll show you the rest of the story

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The Forest Bunker

It is a windy, foggy night. It is spooky, trees are waving, gushing, manufacturing, leaves are whooshing underneath the feet of Damascus. He can hear dogs howling and he sees owls' eyes glowing at him.

Damascus is a 15 year old boy, he looks like the person from Home Alone. His blonde hair is flowing in the wind. He is clumsy and trips over small rocks camouflaged in the grass, his 5 foot 6 body was just laying on  the ground. He is terrified but he gets up with a smile on his face and continues goofily walking.

He trips and falls, just in front of a hatch. 

He then twisted the opening of the rusty Hatch, creaaaak. He then grabs his rope from his bag and lowers himself into the dungeon below. He saw  people that were working on nukes and armory weapons. They couldn’t see the ring leader-Nigel Grave though because he had a ghillie suit on.

So then he goes home and tells his family so that his family can tell the government to investigate this villain and this villain's bunker. His mum tells the government. Then the government sends the army soldiers rushing down to the bunker for investigation. They find Nigel Grave.

Hes 82 years old, he looks like he just got off the street because he has ripped shirt, his hair is brown, he is 7.0ft. His personality is rough and he doesn't like when people compliment him and his walking stick has powers to freeze people, turn them on fire and even kill them. He has 10 scars on his face and he uses his walking stick that has powers to also kill people. 

The army soldiers find the old man and ask him what he is doing. He replies with “you humans have continued to annoy me so I am going to destroy the earth so then you guys suffer!” The army then said "You are not going to destroy the earth because we are here to stop you if you're angry at us just go to a therapist and they will help you.” 

He then said “ no!!!” in an angry voice so then the soldiers detained him in a subtle way they then walked him out the bunker slowly. 

They got to the helicopter and got him inside the helicopter, flew back to the federal prison to get his identification. He got jailed for 75 years for attempt of murder, his name is Nigel Grave.

The way I could've done better is to have more capital letters and more full stops.

I enjoyed my writing because it was involved with history and guns witch I think is cool learning about all that kind of learning.

I Hope you enjoyed this blog post leave a comment if you did, BYE