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Thursday 13 September 2018

Slime quick write

Kia ora everyone today I am going to show you my post about this quick write about this Slime He is a Slime that lived in a house and if you want more more of the story read here-

One day there was slime in a fridge and it jumps out whenever you open the fridge and you get a hell of a fright if you open it. The Slime is green and red and it Turns red if you open the fridge but it is green when the fridge is closed. But one day the Slime was asleep in the fridge and a person open it and he saw the Slime green and the Slime wasn't turning red! the man grabbed the Slime and throw it outside into the garden so the man would not have a Big grumpy Slime in his fridge. The next day the Slime woke up in the rubbish bin maybe the garbage man grabbed the Slime and put it in the bin but anyway the Slime was in the bin red as a cerry it was so angry that it was not in the fridge. The Slime wanted to be in the fridge  so he wiggled to the man's house and then went to the fridge and smacked it with his Slime powers and opened the fridge. When the fridge was open the Slime slithered his way in like a snake. Then the Slime was green again happily living the rest of his life in the the fridge. The man died 20 years later and the house was abandoned with the Slime still in the fridge and the Slime was sleeping.200 years later in 2018 the Slime was 300 years old and in 2018 he was too old to live so he died that day and he got put on top of the man that lived in the abandoned house that was living 280 years ago. So the Slime got put in the grave that day.

The END.

 Hope you like it blog you later bye!

7 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Ethan H, I like your story it is really cool, I also like how you colored it !

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  2. Kia Ora Ethan H, I like your story it is really cool, I also like how you colored it !

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  3. i like the slide and the lime it is a very good story cat you make a animathon

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  4. cool did you do it in real life or did you just write it

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    1. Kia ora Jrae,
      I just telling that I did not do this in real life but thanks for the comment.

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  5. Kia Ora Ethan H, I like how you posted your quick write that you did. WOW YOU HAVE KNOCKED OFF MY SOCKS!! This is SOOO awesome !!

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    1. Kia ora Keisha thanks for the comment and I enjoyed writing this story.

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