I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello welcome back to another blog post today I'm going to show you My Writing for this year so I have a slide and I have my Writing in It and from my blog and from my drive so I hope you enjoy.
Hai Ethan, This is a good blog post because I can see your writing and I think your writing is really good. This is also a good blog post because I like to read and with this blog post i can read your story's. Maybe next time you could add some more detail but apart from that its cool
Hi Ethan H you did a good job on this for writing and you write a lot it looks like good job make the colorful word's a bit bigger so we can see it but i like how you did it got to do more work bye.
Kia Ora Ethan H, I like your writing because your writing is very good.And I like to read your story about the man and the slime. And your writing goal is very good too.
Kia Ora Ethan H, I liked the way you made your writing look better when you did the before & after in your writing. I can really see the difference because there are so many capital letters in the middle of sentences. Did you know that because and but is for middle of sentences. How come you keep adding capital letters in the middle of sentences? To improve you could describe more about the post in the introduction. Other than that, you did a great job! Keep it up!
Kia ora Ethan H i like how you teached us alot all about chetah but please put more information about cheetah because i really want learn more and more and more i love cheetahs #AWESOMEW-CHRISTINA
Kia ora Ethan H it's Azire And i like the way you have add and ending and stuff like that.Did you think about adding a different color because we can read it but it's okay. Next time you could add a different color anyway bye BLOG YOU LATER
Hi Ethan H Jesse here I like that you finished your writing slide and it looks like you are a good writer but you mist what your attitude is towards your writing and your writing level. BLOG YOU LATER!!!
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Hai Ethan, This is a good blog post because I can see your writing and I think your writing is really good. This is also a good blog post because I like to read and with this blog post i can read your story's. Maybe next time you could add some more detail but apart from that its cool
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan H you did a good job on this for writing and you write a lot it looks like good job make the colorful word's a bit bigger so we can see it but i like how you did it got to do more work bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Addison Yeah I will fix the Colourful letters to big ones that just was a mistake. But thanks for noticing bye
DeleteHi Ethan.i like the way you have fines you writing.making the words bigger.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ethan H, I like your writing because your writing is very good.And I like to read your story about the man and the slime. And your writing goal is very good too.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ethan H,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you made your writing look better when you did the before & after in your writing. I can really see the difference because there are so many capital letters in the middle of sentences. Did you know that because and but is for middle of sentences. How come you keep adding capital letters in the middle of sentences? To improve you could describe more about the post in the introduction. Other than that, you did a great job! Keep it up!
Kia ora Ethan H i like how you teached us alot all about chetah but please put more information about cheetah because i really want learn more and more and more i love cheetahs #AWESOMEW-CHRISTINA
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ethan H it's Azire And i like the way you have add and ending and stuff like that.Did you think about adding a different color because we can read it but it's okay. Next time you could add a different color anyway bye BLOG YOU LATER
ReplyDeleteHello ethan nice to see that you post the writing slide just one small problem you put colour words and make it big plz thanks bye
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan H Jesse here I like that you finished your writing slide and it looks like you are a good writer but you mist what your attitude is towards your writing and your writing level. BLOG YOU LATER!!!
ReplyDeleteKia ora jesse Thanks for your comment and the teacher said just leave those two bits out.
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